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| Posted: 01 Sep 2009 04:09 Last Edited By: Chase5434 | ||
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Here's part 1 for my plot for SM4: Spider-Man(swinging through the city): Hello, I'm Peter Parker, your friendly neighborhood... ah, you get it. I've come along way from getting bitten by a Spider. (camera focuses on MJ) Oh, and that, that's my girlfriend, Mary Jane Watson. Well, right now, I've got to get to my date with her. See Ya!
(Peter walks into resturant) MJ: Hey, Tiger Peter Parker: Hi, MJ. What do you want to eat? It's all on me. MJ: I'll have some spaghetti and a lemonade please Peter: Yes, your highness (they both laugh) Waitress: Hello, may I take your order. (she looks up from her note pad) Oh, Peter, MJ, hows it going! Peter: Oh, hey Gwen! What are you doing here? Gwen: I needed a job. This is the best I can do right now. Oh, do you want to meet my new boyfriend? (they walk over to another table) Gwen: This is Angelo Fortunato (Angelo and Peter shake hands) Peter: Nice to meet you. I'm Peter Parker Angelo: Oh, your Gwen's tutor in college. I've heard so much about you. (Angelo and MJ shake hands) MJ: I'm Mary Jane Watson, Peter's Girlfriend Angelo: well it was nice seeing you Peter and MJ: Bye! (they start back to their table) Peter: He doesn't seem so bad. MJ: Well, that's what you thought about Norman Osborn, and look what happened to him.(like my use of foreshadowing?) Gwen: Well what can I get for you? Peter: Well I'll have some tomato soup and a Dr. Pepper, and some spaghetti and lemonade for the beautiful lady (MJ laughs) (They walk out of the resturant after they eat and Peter swings her home.) MJ: Thanks, Peter, Bye! Peter: Bye! (He swings to his apartment and goes up the stairs) Mr. Ditkovitch: Rent! Peter: Mr. Ditkovitch, I'm sorry, but my boss is really strict, and he won't pay me. But I promise I'll pay that rent by the end of this week. Ursula: Hi, Peter, would you like some brownies? Peter: Sure, Thanks! (He takes one) Ursula: Your Welcome! (Peter goes to bed) (He gets up the next morning and looks at his alarm clock) Peter: Oh, man! I'm gonna be late to Dr. Conner's expiriment! To be continued once I come up with more ideas... |
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| Posted: 01 Sep 2009 14:38 | ||
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 whose going to be the villain?__________________ |
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| Posted: 01 Sep 2009 15:31 | ||
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| The villains are going to be Carnage, and Gwen's boyfriend as the new Venom | ||
| Posted: 02 Sep 2009 00:03 Last Edited By: Chase5434 | ||
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here's part 2: (Peter gets dressed quickly and runs out to Dr. Conner's class and on his way he sees a meteor)
Peter Parker: Well I might as well get some pics for JJ (He takes some pictures and doesn't notice the dark red-violet symbiote sneak out of the meteor and attach to his shoe) Peter: Iv'e got to get going (he walks into class) Peter: Sorry I'm late Dr. Con- Dr. Conners: Just take a seat (as Peter sits down the symbiote crawls off of his shoe and slithers over to a glass case that held a sample of the Venom symbiote and lets it out) (After the class ended Peter left the building and so did the symbiotes) (Peter enters the Daily Bugle) Peter: Hey, Mr. Jameson, I've got some pictures J. Jonah Jameson(angrily): They're crap! I send you for photos of Spider-Man and you- Betty Brant: Watch the anger! Jameson: I don't care just shut-(he calms down) thank you. (he turns back to Peter) Anyway I didn't send you for pictures of space rocks! Peter: Mr. Jameson, Spider-Man is my friend and you keep printing lies about him! Jameson: Well get some pictures or your not getting paid! (That Night, Gwen and Angelo where having a date on a balcony at Angelo's Mansion watching the stars) Angelo: How about I go get us some drinks Gwen: Yeah sure that would be nice (Angelo Leaves for Drinks) (Meanwhile Spider-Man chases escaped convict Cletus Kasady who climbs up the ladder to the balcony trying to get away) Gwen: Who are you? Cletus: I need to hide! Gwen: Your not hiding here, criminal! (she could tell from the orange jumpsuit) (Spider-Man lands on the balcony as Cletus shoots Gwen) Spidey: Gwen! (He kneels next to Gwen as She dies and Angelo Fortunato enters) Angelo: What've you done to her?! Spidey: I swear I didn't- Angelo: Get off of my balcony! (Spidey swings away as the Venom symbiote attaches to Angelo's ankle and grows up his entire body and turns him into the second Venom) Angelo/Venom: I'll kill you Spider-Man! To Be Continued... |
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| Posted: 02 Sep 2009 18:22 | ||
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A second Venom, hmm I hadn't considered that. I think though I would prefer a more classic villain, but there's no telling who they'll end up with.
I'd like to know what happened to Sandman. __________________ |
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| Posted: 03 Sep 2009 05:15 | ||
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Well if you want classic villains, my Spidey 5 plot is probably going to have either Mysterio, Hobgoblin, Scorpion, or Morbius the Living Vampire. wich one of those do you most want to see?
P.S. I'm also gonna put Black Cat in along with whoever you choose |
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| Posted: 03 Sep 2009 15:45 | ||
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I love Morbius. He was always one of my favorite villains. __________________ |
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| Posted: 04 Sep 2009 00:53 | ||
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| I know! He's the Best! | ||
| Posted: 04 Sep 2009 02:13 | ||
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here's part 3: (Peter is walking MJ home from the cemetary after Gwen's Funeral)
Mary Jane: Only Yesterday she was introducing us to Angelo and now... wait a second where is Angelo? He wasn't even at the funeral! Peter: Hmmm. I guess he felt it was to painful to see her dead for another second MJ: I guess. (MJ walks into her apartment building after they arrive) Peter: See Ya 'round MJ: Bye, Peter (As Peter walks home A black Figure atop a building throws a web at him and pulls him up) Peter: What the? (He sees that the figure is Venom) Peter: Eddie Brock? Venom: (as his face peels back) Hey Parker! Peter: Angelo? But the suit, it was destr- Venom: don't forget that sample you gave to your college proffesser! Peter: But how did you know? Venom: Well this suit tells me everything I need to know. Like your secret identity, How your Uncle Ben was killed, and all of those you love! Peter: Well did it tell you that I didn't kill Gwen?! Venom: Oh, I know you killed Gwen! It's in your blood to kill. Remember how you killed the man you thought killed your Uncle, and how you tried to kill your Uncle's Actual Killer. Peter: First of all, that man tripped and fell out a window, and I tried to kill my Uncle's Killer under influence of that suit your wearing wich you should get rid of or it'll take you over. It's a symbiote, Angelo! Venom: (as his Venom face reattaches) call me Venom! (They battle for a while until Peter nearly knocks him out) Venom: (as he swings away) You'll die next time Parker! to be continued... |
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| Posted: 04 Sep 2009 15:45 Last Edited By: Tim | ||
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This could spell trouble for the Wall Crawler!   __________________ |
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| Posted: 07 Sep 2009 04:07 | ||
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here's part 4: (Peter walks into the Daily Bugle)
J. Jonah Jameson: Parker! Do you have pictures of Spider-Man. Peter: No, Mr. Jameson. Do you honestly think I'll take those pictures when you'll just keep lying about him anyway? Jameson: They aren't lies, they're the truth! Robbie, I've got the front page headline, Stubborn photographer won't even listen to his own boss! Hoffman: Uh, do you really think he's gonna put that as the headline? It doesn't really sound front page worthy. Jameson: It's a joke, Hoffman! Robbie: Seriousley Jonah, we've got to get something for that front page or we'll have to cancel! Jameson: Alright, and what are you still doing in my office. Get out of here! (Peter leaves and starts toward his Aunt May's apartment with her medication perscription) Peter: Hey, Aunt May, are you home? (He sees a note on the table) The Note says: If you ever want to see your Aunt again, come to times square now! Peter: Angelo! (He changes into the Spidey suit and swings to times square) Venom: Say goodbye to gramma Spidey! May: Get your ugly hands off of me, monster! Spidey: Let the boy scouts help an old lady cross the street would ya! May: Spider-Man, help! (He webs at Aunt May but misses) Venom: Oooh, to slow (Spidey and Venom battle with Aunt May constantly being tossed around until Venom gets run over by a car) (Spidey swings May back to her Apartment) Spidey: Stay out of trouble from now on. May: Oh trust me, I will. To be continued... |
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| Posted: 07 Sep 2009 18:27 | ||
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Venom getting hit by a car sounds like a good scene. __________________ |
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| Posted: 08 Sep 2009 04:06 | ||
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| Posted: 18 Sep 2009 03:35 | ||
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I am really looking forward the new movie, I thought the original Spiderman was the best then two and three progressively got worse... But I think is going to come back and make up for them both. So, like I said I am really excited to see what they do with this one. So far I like what I hear! __________________ Check out my blog: spiderman costumes
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| Posted: 19 Sep 2009 02:34 | ||
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here's part five: (Cletus Kasady is on the run from the cops) Captain George Stacey: Stick em up! You are arrested for the murder of my daughter!
Some random cop: Captain, Spider-man killed her. George Stacey: Spider-man's not a killer, and this guy was near the crime scene, was he not? cop: Whatever you say, Captain (They eventually corner Cletus Kasady and take him to Ravencroft Asylum for insanity)(Before the car starts driving though, the Carnage Symbiote attaches to the bottom of the car)(Cletus is locked up in a cell inside Ravencroft regretting he was alive when a dark red violet substance attacks him) Cletus: No! No! No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (The Symbiote had taken him over, he broke out of the cell and killed all the security guards) Carnage had found a host to be continued... |
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| Posted: 02 Nov 2009 15:17 | ||
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this is good mabe you shou kill Carnage and the second Venom at the same time
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